This is the final version of our film. We have added the non diegetic soundtrack which helps the story flow more than the version without narration as you can now tell what the character is thinking. This helps to connote that the character is caught up in his thoughts and that the problems are all in his head. The intense soundtrack also helps to build the feeling of tension and action in the chase scene.
Much better! Is there supposed to be a voice over at the end though? I thought I could hear something but it was vey faint.... Check this.
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