A2 "pitch" and feedback

This was our pitch for our idea and the sample scene to our classmates, who in turn provided feedback to us on how we could develop our idea and what we should keep the same. These points are taken from their feedback:
bullet point: Improve the lighting situation, add dialogue, add non diagetic soundtrack. This exercise proved very useful as it helped us to decide on the fact that our story needed narration to fully get the point across which was something we were already thinking about. the fact that our classmates liked the story also meant that we felt more comfortable in pursuing the idea that our character was "running from himself".