Feedback analysis

We recieved a lot of helpful points from our feedback with regards to our sample scene, with the main point being that the film was hard to follow without prior knowledge of the story. we took this into account and as we were thinking of doing, we now intend to use a non diegetic narration over the top of our film to portray the story. As i wrote on the sample scene post, we also received positive feedback with regards to our story with many people liking the message of the film that the character is "running from himself". this positive attitude has given us much more freedom with regards to writing a narration script as we can really build upon the idea of the character being in a dark state of mind.